Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Bridging Program, mission accomplished.






Oh at last the bridging program comes to the end!! grrrr... i miss my class n dr carol already. Anyway we did very well today for the presentation!!!! I did the introduction part, Len's doing the case study, Jerry is doing the factors n conclusion and Xiao Hui is doing the recommendations part.yahooooooo!! we get a good comment from the teachers. woohooooo!!! And here's the comment bout it. Check it out peeps! ;)

BRIDGING PROGRAM-ASSESSMENT FOR ORAL PRESENTATION:

Topic: Cross Cultural communication in business negotiations

Name of Student: Bui Ngoc Tan, Chye Xiao Hui, Gu Yao, Siti Zaharah Rezaly, Sok Len

Organisation: Good introduction - good team work, slides well done (not too many and clear), still same grammar errors but really very good. Timing well controlled. All speakers well integrated.

Content: Well developed discussion with good examples.

Language: Really very good. All speakers quite clear. English excellent.

Voice: Again, this was good. Keep working on how to be able to deliver without relying on reading too much so that the face can be up and the voice well projected.

Relationship with Audience: Mostly very good. Its important to keep practicing how to maintain eye contact and hold the audience interest. Questions well handled.

Overall: You all appear to have worked well as a group. Thank you. Well done.

BRIDGING PROGRAM- ASSESSMENT FOR WRITTEN REPORT

Topic: Cross-cultural communication in business negotiations

Name of Student: Bui Ngoc Tan, Chye Xiao Hui, Gu Yao, Siti Zaharah Rezaly, Sok Len

Structure: The structure is very good and set out as required.

Content: The content is comprehensive with an adequate amount of examples.

Tone and Style: Try not to (never) use 1st or 2nd person pronouns in academic writing. Even if the original has that its important to change it (exception direct quote). Use impersonal writing, 3rd person or passive.

Referencing: Referencing is well done with a variety of author prominent and not prominent in text references. List is excellent.

Grammar and Spelling: This is really very good. Check the editing i've done on the pages and make sure you understand.

Overall: This is a good report overall and shows positive team work.

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